Hi Rosie
you discribed the emerald city really well and included all your sences. I like the way you included Dorothy in your description great work!!!
from Maddie
Hi Rosie, I thought your work was realy good the way you described the emerald city but next time describe what is around you and not just the things that are there
Hi Rosie I like it telling me everything is green without saying the words! Although you might want to try to use something other than green each time.
Hi Rosie
you discribed the emerald city really well and included all your sences. I like the way you included Dorothy in your description great work!!!
from Maddie
Hi Rosie, I thought your work was realy good the way you described the emerald city but next time describe what is around you and not just the things that are there
Hi Rosie I like it telling me everything is green without saying the words! Although you might want to try to use something other than green each time.