Well done Hugo. You created a brilliant winter poem. You explained your winter way very well. My only improvment is that maby you can make the poetry a bit more clear.
Thanks for the comment Nathalie, I will certainly take that to mind next time.
Hi Hugo,
I really like your poem, it really describes winter! Good job!
I really like your poem. I can picture it in my head !
It is great i love how you said ducking and diving but try and make it more in to apoem than story
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Well done Hugo. You created a brilliant winter poem. You explained your winter way very well. My only improvment is that maby you can make the poetry a bit more clear.
Thanks for the comment Nathalie, I will certainly take that to mind next time.
Hi Hugo,
I really like your poem, it really describes winter! Good job!
Hi Hugo,
I really like your poem.
I can picture it in my head !
It is great i love how you said ducking and diving but try and make it more in to apoem than story