Hi Sophie nice work you used really figurative language but some of it didn’t make sense
Your figurative language is fantastic and your personification is great. Next time work on spelling and capitals.
Hi Sophie, I really like your work because you used very good describing words like slid and silky I also like your use of the word green so we know the place is green But next time you do a blog try to use more verbs.
Hello Sophie I liked your description but you could improve on your spelling.
Hi Sophie, I really liked your description although some of it didn’t make sense.
Thank you for the very useful comments.
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Hi Sophie nice work you used really figurative language but some of it didn’t make sense
Your figurative language is fantastic and your personification is great. Next time work on spelling and capitals.
Hi Sophie,
I really like your work because you used very good describing words like slid and silky
I also like your use of the word green so we know the place is green
But next time you do a blog try to use more verbs.
Hello Sophie I liked your description but you could improve on your spelling.
Hi Sophie,
I really liked your description although some of it didn’t make sense.
Thank you for the very useful comments.