Hi Rosie,
Amazing work. I loved how you said it was a cold winter night at Jessie’s house it really invited me in. Everybody is seeming to make this mistake so your not the only one you are forgetting to put a capital letter at the start of when somebody is speaking. I hope we see more work like that (But improved) Well done!
Ava
Well done Rosie. I loved the words you used instead of said. And I must say it was brill what you did with only 100 words. My only improvement is that maby you could give us more of what the place looked like. I seriously loved your amazing work. Keep it up.
Hi Rosie,
Amazing work. I loved how you said it was a cold winter night at Jessie’s house it really invited me in. Everybody is seeming to make this mistake so your not the only one you are forgetting to put a capital letter at the start of when somebody is speaking. I hope we see more work like that (But improved) Well done!
Ava
Well done Rosie. I loved the words you used instead of said. And I must say it was brill what you did with only 100 words. My only improvement is that maby you could give us more of what the place looked like. I seriously loved your amazing work. Keep it up.