Hey Ava, 😉 Nice piece of work, I like how you compared your story with life itself by saying his parents have split up. next time you could use brackets instead of always starting a new sentence.
Hey Ava, I thought your peice was great and very descriptive but next time try to make something funny and exciting happen
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Hey Ava, 😉
Nice piece of work, I like how you compared your story with life itself by saying his parents have split up.
next time you could use brackets instead of always starting a new sentence.
Hey Ava, I thought your peice was great and very descriptive but next time try to make something funny and exciting happen