To Isabella,
That was a really mysterious story I liked it a lot. Also I liked how you said when the two dogs came in the silence broke amazing writing! The only thing you could improve on is you grammar because you need to leave spaces in between your word. Really good.
From Ava
Hi Isabella,
That was the best piece of writing I have seen on the blog. It was so mysterious and I really loved it! The only thing you could improve on is leaving spaces between your work.
To Isabella,
That was a really mysterious story I liked it a lot. Also I liked how you said when the two dogs came in the silence broke amazing writing! The only thing you could improve on is you grammar because you need to leave spaces in between your word. Really good.
From Ava
Hi Isabella,
That was the best piece of writing I have seen on the blog. It was so mysterious and I really loved it! The only thing you could improve on is leaving spaces between your work.