Hi Theo,
I thought your blog would have been good if the team was completely different. If you had put the arsenal crest up on your blog and written about how arsenal are truthfully the best team ever, I would give this five stars. But you didn’t…
Anyway, I think this was written very well but you used some phrases incorrectly:
When you wrote: No one has takes mercy… that doesn’t make sense.
It should have been: No one takes mercy/No one has taken mercy.
Apart from that everything was great so keep up the good work and encourage everyone else to BLog BLOg BLOG!
Hi Theo,
Liked the poem. It almost had a beat. What kind of poem was that? Where’s the evidence? I disagree with everything you’ve written. Arsenal are the best team ever!!!
yours formally
Shay
Hi Theo,
Luckily for you, I totally disagree with the two comments above. Man United are a miles better team than Arsenal…
However, I support Tottenham Hotspur (the greatest team ever) and, as you probably already know, we beat you 3-2 AWAY!
Just a quick reminder to Rafi and Shay who support Arsenal, Spurs are 4th in the league with 26 points wheras you are only 10th with 21 points.
Jessica 😀
Hi Theo,
I thought your blog would have been good if the team was completely different. If you had put the arsenal crest up on your blog and written about how arsenal are truthfully the best team ever, I would give this five stars. But you didn’t…
Anyway, I think this was written very well but you used some phrases incorrectly:
When you wrote: No one has takes mercy… that doesn’t make sense.
It should have been: No one takes mercy/No one has taken mercy.
Apart from that everything was great so keep up the good work and encourage everyone else to BLog BLOg BLOG!
Hi Theo,
Liked the poem. It almost had a beat. What kind of poem was that? Where’s the evidence? I disagree with everything you’ve written. Arsenal are the best team ever!!!
yours formally
Shay
Hi Theo,
Luckily for you, I totally disagree with the two comments above. Man United are a miles better team than Arsenal…
However, I support Tottenham Hotspur (the greatest team ever) and, as you probably already know, we beat you 3-2 AWAY!
Just a quick reminder to Rafi and Shay who support Arsenal, Spurs are 4th in the league with 26 points wheras you are only 10th with 21 points.
Jessica 😀