my mum’s ring

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  1. Ms Ashraf says:

    It feels like a very special ring…great use of rhymes. Have you tried starting some of your sentences in a different way, as you use She wears alot.. or even some interesting connectives. Keep blogging your poems I think we are all enjoying them.

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