very good Hermione, I like your work, but you need to work on your punchuation
Well done I loved reading your writing.You should put more punctuation in your writing at the start of someone speeking you should always put CAPITALS in!!
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very good Hermione,
I like your work, but you need to work on your punchuation
Well done I loved reading your writing.You should put more punctuation in your writing
at the start of someone speeking you should always put CAPITALS in!!