To Cleo,
That was a realy nice peice of work you captured me into your blogg. I like how you said I am going to school and then you see the frog/toad but still remeber about school because I wouldn’t have remembered. Brilliant!
From Ava
What an interesting sounding creature.
I liked your use of speech marks. I can see that you remembered all the rules- well done 🙂
I think that maybe you could have developed the description of the froad a bit more instead of ‘just running off to school’, and then ended off with your sentence: “That’s very nice,” I said a bit jealous and still confused.
Keep up the good work!
To Cleo,
That was a realy nice peice of work you captured me into your blogg. I like how you said I am going to school and then you see the frog/toad but still remeber about school because I wouldn’t have remembered. Brilliant!
From Ava
What an interesting sounding creature.
I liked your use of speech marks. I can see that you remembered all the rules- well done 🙂
I think that maybe you could have developed the description of the froad a bit more instead of ‘just running off to school’, and then ended off with your sentence: “That’s very nice,” I said a bit jealous and still confused.
Keep up the good work!