Tony and the Crocodile-Bear Beast

2 Responses to Tony and the Crocodile-Bear Beast

1. Peter C says:

   November 5, 2012 at 11:26 am

   Hi Nicky I liked your blog.It had good description but whate countery did Tony live in.
2. Mrs Cohen says:

   November 5, 2012 at 11:55 am

   What a terrifying story! I would not like to meet this terrible beast with flame breath!
   I liked how you used so much description- well done.
   I spotted somewhere you have not used a capital letter. Can you see where it is?
   Keep up the good work 🙂

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