This xcreature sounds very strange indead!
I like how you have used your speech marks in the first sentence where you place how mum spoke in between: “What”, asked my mum, “is that”?
Was this for the 100WC? I wonder if you could have continued the story a bit more- did your mum and gran find out about Thing? What did you do when you were getting strange looks? How did you feel?
This xcreature sounds very strange indead!
I like how you have used your speech marks in the first sentence where you place how mum spoke in between: “What”, asked my mum, “is that”?
Was this for the 100WC? I wonder if you could have continued the story a bit more- did your mum and gran find out about Thing? What did you do when you were getting strange looks? How did you feel?