Good job! Next time just check your spelling a little more. Otherwise, good job Niyusha! The bold letters are really cool by the way! This is my favorite post! Bravo, good job!
Niyusha–absolutely love the creativity with the bold letters–it reminds me a bit like Emily Dickinson! Isn’t it awful to be in the wrong place at the wrong time like your character? Mind the punctuation in this 100WC as it will allow the reader to pause and enjoy this story. (Teacher from Ocean City, NJ, USA)
great job, I really think you put a lot of effort into it.
Good job! Next time just check your spelling a little more. Otherwise, good job Niyusha! The bold letters are really cool by the way! This is my favorite post! Bravo, good job!
Nice story! It could’ve used some punctuation, but otherwise it was pretty good.
Wow! Very creative, loved what you did with the IT WASN’T MY FAULT. I thought it was very fun.
Good job, i think it is a great story!
I really liked your story. I would have never though of doing that!
Niyusha–absolutely love the creativity with the bold letters–it reminds me a bit like Emily Dickinson! Isn’t it awful to be in the wrong place at the wrong time like your character? Mind the punctuation in this 100WC as it will allow the reader to pause and enjoy this story. (Teacher from Ocean City, NJ, USA)