An interesting and well written piece Louis. I see that you believe that parents are responsible for a child’s evil character. Does that mean they are also responsible for the goodness in them too??? Perhaps we can control those demons that seem to take us over, aren’t we strong enough to defeat them? Have a go.
Good writing nevertheless.
Hello Louis, this is a super piece for the 100WC. You have used a great range of vocabulary. Well done. With all this energy, I hope that character finds a way to turn the situation around.
Hi Louis. This is such an imaginative story, and you have used lots of interesing words. I like the way you don’t quite explain whether it is the dad’s fault for the way he brought your character up, or whether their really is some sort of paranormal activity making him act this way. Whichever it is, I hope he finds a way to change.
An interesting and well written piece Louis. I see that you believe that parents are responsible for a child’s evil character. Does that mean they are also responsible for the goodness in them too??? Perhaps we can control those demons that seem to take us over, aren’t we strong enough to defeat them? Have a go.
Good writing nevertheless.
You wrote very well, I liked your story.
Hello Louis, this is a super piece for the 100WC. You have used a great range of vocabulary. Well done. With all this energy, I hope that character finds a way to turn the situation around.
Hi Louis. This is such an imaginative story, and you have used lots of interesing words. I like the way you don’t quite explain whether it is the dad’s fault for the way he brought your character up, or whether their really is some sort of paranormal activity making him act this way. Whichever it is, I hope he finds a way to change.