I really enjoyed reading this. I also like the different names you use. Nice job Rafi. 🙂
I really liked this. You must have taken a lot of time to write this. Good job Rafi.
This was a very interesting story. It was good!
I really liked how you put your brother into the story. It made it very believable from a kids view. Older siblings get blamed for everything! 🙂
This is a great story. I love all the words you used and all the adjectives to really describe what you were saying and experience. Love it!
Very good
Wow! Really good story. I liked all of the adjective that described this story. Good job!
That’s cool. I agree Abby, I enjoyed it.
I really liked the story because most of us with younger siblings can relate to this story. 😉
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I really enjoyed reading this. I also like the different names you use. Nice job Rafi. 🙂
I really liked this. You must have taken a lot of time to write this. Good job Rafi.
This was a very interesting story. It was good!
I really liked how you put your brother into the story. It made it very believable from a kids view. Older siblings get blamed for everything! 🙂
This is a great story. I love all the words you used and all the adjectives to really describe what you were saying and experience. Love it!
Very good
Wow! Really good story. I liked all of the adjective that described this story. Good job!
That’s cool. I agree Abby, I enjoyed it.
I really liked the story because most of us with younger siblings can relate to this story. 😉