Sloppy Dog-100wc

Posted on February 9, 2012 by Deleted User
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7 Responses to Sloppy Dog-100wc

  1. Armelle says:
    February 9, 2012 at 10:03 am

    Wow Anna your writtings really funny but you said slolppy dog lots and I thought you could have said something else

  2. kade s st john vianney says:
    February 9, 2012 at 3:19 pm

    Hello that was very good.

  3. Brianna (St. John Vianney) says:
    February 9, 2012 at 3:21 pm

    This was an excellent story. Very well written. I like the use of words.

  4. Sarah G. St. Johns says:
    February 9, 2012 at 4:04 pm

    Cool story I like the part about the diary.

  5. Hannah M. (St. John Vianney) says:
    February 9, 2012 at 4:39 pm

    Wow you’re a very good writer!

  6. Sophie B says:
    February 10, 2012 at 6:30 pm

    Anna, I love the way you told a whole story using so few words, and you managed to get the little sister’s character across really nicely. Well done.

  7. sarahg says:
    February 23, 2012 at 9:27 am

    Hi Anna
    I like your use of adjectives like horror and havoc.
    How did you come up with the idea?
    from SARAH

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