Hi Thomas, well done for completing the 100 word challenge. This is a great story and I like how you have used the prompt to reinvent the Christmas tree, wouldn’t it be funny if that actually occurred one year! Super punctuation, just remember when writing ‘it is’, the shortened/ abbreviated version needs an apostrophe, ‘it’s’ such as in your sentences…’it’s snowing’. Keep up the writing, I look forward to reading more.
Hi Thomas, well done for completing the 100 word challenge. This is a great story and I like how you have used the prompt to reinvent the Christmas tree, wouldn’t it be funny if that actually occurred one year! Super punctuation, just remember when writing ‘it is’, the shortened/ abbreviated version needs an apostrophe, ‘it’s’ such as in your sentences…’it’s snowing’. Keep up the writing, I look forward to reading more.
I really like your 100 word challenge Thomas. My favourite part is when your mum says that its the new style of christmas tree>