Sappy’s surprise 100wc

2 Responses to Sappy’s surprise 100wc

1. Milla says:

   November 30, 2012 at 2:12 pm

   Hi Ava
   Nice work good description on how sappy was feeling but I think you could have finished and closed it in a more affective way thanks nice job
   Millaxx
2. Maddie m says:

   January 14, 2013 at 12:00 pm

   Hi Ava
   I really liked the way said that Sappy’s freinds hated the restaurant then the freinds all came to the restaurant.
   In the last sentence you missed out a word which I think should be is.
   From Maddie M

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