Hello Louis. Well done for writing your 100 Word Challenge this week. This is a very humorous story you have written, you have made me laugh so much! What a brilliant imagination you have! I enjoyed reading every bit of it. Well done for using the correct punctuation, you have left me laughing! I liked the range of words you have used for the word ‘said’, for example: ‘declared’ and ‘announced’. I can’t wait to read more of your 100 Word Challenges now Louis, keep up the good work!
Hello Louis. Well done for writing your 100 Word Challenge this week. This is a very humorous story you have written, you have made me laugh so much! What a brilliant imagination you have! I enjoyed reading every bit of it. Well done for using the correct punctuation, you have left me laughing! I liked the range of words you have used for the word ‘said’, for example: ‘declared’ and ‘announced’. I can’t wait to read more of your 100 Word Challenges now Louis, keep up the good work!