Well done Madison, I love the idea of toys coming alive when we’re not looking. Was Toy Story (the film) your inspiration?
Try hard to proof read your work. There are some little errors – full stops and spaces and missed capital letters. Little things, just like your toys! I really like your character’s name – what made you choose that?
This is a fun story. Very cute. Very good imagination.
Well done Madison, I love the idea of toys coming alive when we’re not looking. Was Toy Story (the film) your inspiration?
Try hard to proof read your work. There are some little errors – full stops and spaces and missed capital letters. Little things, just like your toys! I really like your character’s name – what made you choose that?
Andrew
Team 100wc
You missed out some puncuation Madison you should work on your puncuation.
Good work, I really liked how all the toys came alive.
It was a bit like toy story, do you like that film?
yes I DO