the ground slowly parted away

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  1. Mrs Robinson (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Jesse
    Thank you for your 100WC – I think you have used week 19’s prompt rather than week 20’s but never mind. It is a lovely story that has lots of things going on in it. Just remember the reader needs to take a breath so put in some full stops next and that would be great.

  2. Fay (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Jesse,
    Sofia certainly has a kind, supportive and fun family. Thank you for your entry to the 100 word challenge. I hope you manage to sumbit one for this week too because it will be open a week longer. Well done.

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