Wow great story, thank goodness Millie was safe in the end!
Remember to proof read your work for typos and little mistakes before you publish. Also, if you are using a new and adventurous work remember to look up the correct spelling in the dictionary e.g. tentatively.
Wow great story, thank goodness Millie was safe in the end!
Remember to proof read your work for typos and little mistakes before you publish. Also, if you are using a new and adventurous work remember to look up the correct spelling in the dictionary e.g. tentatively.
I like this one , Anna, its really mature, almost like a novel. Keep up the writing!
Grandad
Hi Anna
realy good, you did a lot of punctuation.
I want to read the next post now.