Does anyone care

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2 Responses to Does anyone care

  1. Mrs Cohen says:

    An interesting poem! I’m not sure that I would feel bored if I was in pain. Could you think of a different word?
    Remember that even though it’s a poem you still need to include all your punctuation like speech marks.
    Keep blogging 🙂

  2. Anna says:

    Wow Niyusha that is so cool. I love the way the first letter of each line spell DOES ANYONE CARE? I didn’t notice it till later. Well done

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