continued 100 word challlenge the ground slowly parted

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  1. Mrs Cohen says:

    Well done Raphael, it’s great to see you writing so much 🙂
    Remember to read your work back and check for punctuation. There are a few places in your story where you have forgotten to use speech marks and a few capital letters have been left out. Can you find where?
    Keep up the blogging!

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