Wow- a blue box that speaks and walks, very interesting.
There were some parts that were confusing and I wasn’t sure who was speaking. Remember to read your work back to yourself (preferably aloud) to check that it makes sense.
I look forward to reading more of your work 🙂
Wow- a blue box that speaks and walks, very interesting.
There were some parts that were confusing and I wasn’t sure who was speaking. Remember to read your work back to yourself (preferably aloud) to check that it makes sense.
I look forward to reading more of your work 🙂
wow a great post I loved the way you used all of your imagination. Do you use bright blue box to many times?
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It was interasting