Daniel, I’m glad you gave some thought to what was in the first present- sketching pencils are a great present! Perhaps you could have made the second present have something more exciting in it. It felt like a bit of an anti-climax at the end. Is there another way that you could end this 100wc to make it more exciting? Perhaps you could have used your sketch pencils to draw your dream present that comes real in the second box?
Dear Daniel,
What excellent work you have done on your 100WC. I really enjoyed the description you used as you were bounding down the stairs to the present.
Well done.
Mr Foster – Shrewsbury International School Bangkok
http://blogs.shrewsbury.ac.th/year4blog/
Daniel, I’m glad you gave some thought to what was in the first present- sketching pencils are a great present! Perhaps you could have made the second present have something more exciting in it. It felt like a bit of an anti-climax at the end. Is there another way that you could end this 100wc to make it more exciting? Perhaps you could have used your sketch pencils to draw your dream present that comes real in the second box?