James Bond scene gone wrong!

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3 Responses to James Bond scene gone wrong!

  1. Mrs Cohen says:

    An interesting take on James Bond. I liked the twist at the end- very humourous 🙂
    Some things you might want to consider in your future writing:
    1. choose words for their impact, e.g. nice isn’t a great word: a Russian spy who everyone thought was nice
    2. vary your sentence openers- start with a connective or a subordinate clause.
    I look forward to reading more of your writing 🙂

  2. Eusebi says:

    Hi Thomas,
    I liked your story I think the end bit was the funniest bit. 🙂

  3. Louis b says:

    Hi Thomas I really like your story and the end was really funny but James Bond does not drive Harley Davisons. 🙂

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