“It wasn’t my fault”-100WC

2 Responses to “It wasn’t my fault”-100WC

1. Niamh Beirne says:

   February 18, 2012 at 7:43 pm

   Hi Joseph!
   Thank you for your great entry to 100WC. I love your use of dialogue. It makes for a fast paced and interesting read. Your use of colour to describe the mother’s anger is great alsoc and comedic. I have a brilliantly funny image in my head!
   I look forward to reading more.
   Niamh
2. Alex C says:

   February 22, 2012 at 7:29 pm

   I never knew you could write so well the hairs on the back of my neck stood up but maybe you could put more adjectives

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