Well done I like your veiws on Abasi’s story next time try and explain it more.
Hi Clem,
I like your piece of writing because you finish it with a memorable ending. Maybe next time you could describe how you would feel if you were Abasi in greater detail.
WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!
I love this piece of writing! Mabie if you put some commas in the third sentance!
This is well spaced out but you need more writing.
Hi, I like how you changed the title but you need to right more
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Well done I like your veiws on Abasi’s story next time try and explain it more.
Hi Clem,
I like your piece of writing because you finish it with a memorable ending. Maybe next time you could describe how you would feel if you were Abasi in greater detail.
WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!
I love this piece of writing!
Mabie if you put some commas in the third sentance!
This is well spaced out but you need more writing.
Hi,
I like how you changed the title but you need to right more