Hi Alfie, this is a very good as you have talked a lot about Abisi’s life but you wrote something wrong.
Hi, I really like how you changed the title and how you also made a short list of the diffrentces but next time you could make the list longer.
WELL DONE!!!!!!!
I love this piece of writing!!!
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Hi Alfie, this is a very good as you have talked a lot about Abisi’s life but you wrote something wrong.
Hi,
I really like how you changed the title and how you also made a short list of the diffrentces but next time you could make the list longer.
WELL DONE!!!!!!!
I love this piece of writing!!!