Wow Isabella, this is a superb poem. I really like the way you have tried to make it rhyme and you have also injected lots of humour too. Your use of capital letters also help to emphasise certain words in your poem. Poor Mum!
Well done.
Well done Isabella! I found your poem very entertaining to read – it really does sound like a pancake day gone wrong! I love how you managed to make your poem rhyme in places because that can be very hard to do.
WOW! What a AMAZING story.I was really ejoying it but I was really sad when I had to stop reading. Icould of kept on ready it for EVER AND EVER AND EVER!!!!!!!!!!
must of been a very funny day, great work we found it funny LOL
great use of rhyming words too!!
Wow Isabella, this is a superb poem. I really like the way you have tried to make it rhyme and you have also injected lots of humour too. Your use of capital letters also help to emphasise certain words in your poem. Poor Mum!
Well done.
Well done Isabella! I found your poem very entertaining to read – it really does sound like a pancake day gone wrong! I love how you managed to make your poem rhyme in places because that can be very hard to do.
Keep up the fantastic work! 🙂
Laura Team 100WC
WOW! What a AMAZING story.I was really ejoying it but I was really sad when I had to stop reading. Icould of kept on ready it for EVER AND EVER AND EVER!!!!!!!!!!