What an interesting story Evie. Your descriptions are amazing, I especially liked the part where the staircase squeaked like a robin!I felt how exciting it would be to be left at home all alone. Did Evie make it through Mum’s holiday ok?
I am afraid that I forgot to write at the end that the room was as messy as a pig sty and that is why I explained “It wasn’t my fault. Apart from the messy house, I made it through ok!
What an interesting story Evie. Your descriptions are amazing, I especially liked the part where the staircase squeaked like a robin!I felt how exciting it would be to be left at home all alone. Did Evie make it through Mum’s holiday ok?
I am afraid that I forgot to write at the end that the room was as messy as a pig sty and that is why I explained “It wasn’t my fault. Apart from the messy house, I made it through ok!
Well done Evie for doing your best. I liked it when you wrote “the wind howled as loud as a wolf,” because you could imagine how loud the wind was.