It is a lovely poem Lauren. I really like how you decided to write from a bird’s perspective. You could also use it as a riddle 🙂 Like the suspense at the end as well. If you had to finish it… what would happen then? Will your next poem reveal?! 🙂
Keep writing.
What a great piece of writing, Lauren. You really built up the mystery of who your character was – I was pleasantly surprised to find out that it was a bird! Great idea!
It is a lovely poem Lauren. I really like how you decided to write from a bird’s perspective. You could also use it as a riddle 🙂 Like the suspense at the end as well. If you had to finish it… what would happen then? Will your next poem reveal?! 🙂
Keep writing.
What a great piece of writing, Lauren. You really built up the mystery of who your character was – I was pleasantly surprised to find out that it was a bird! Great idea!