Hi Alex
What an amazing piece of writing!
Here are my two stars:
* I like how you have left it on a cliffhanger it makes the reader want to read on.
* I like your connective (however)
Well Done Alex, this is a brilliant piece of work you should be proud of yourself.
Hi Alex
What an amazing piece of writing!
Here are my two stars:
* I like how you have left it on a cliffhanger it makes the reader want to read on.
* I like your connective (however)
Well Done Alex, this is a brilliant piece of work you should be proud of yourself.