The Birds

Posted on June 5, 2013 by Deleted User
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1 Response to The Birds

  1. Sophie (Team 100 WC) says:
    June 9, 2013 at 12:02 pm

    Hi Alex
    What an amazing piece of writing!
    Here are my two stars:
    * I like how you have left it on a cliffhanger it makes the reader want to read on.
    * I like your connective (however)
    Well Done Alex, this is a brilliant piece of work you should be proud of yourself.

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