The Landing

Posted on June 5, 2013 by Deleted User
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1 Response to The Landing

  1. Gabriella says:
    June 8, 2013 at 5:54 pm

    Your story hooked me right from the start Holly!
    The descriptions made your story come to life in my
    mind! I like when you say ‘Some of the party felt sad
    as their withered claws scrapped the dry ground.’
    Wonderful!

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