It sounds a lovely day in your 100 word challenge, Hal, and perfect for gardening! You’ve described your nouns really well in this – I particularly liked your phrase ‘crunched my delicious popping breakfast’. Maybe next time you could use some adverbs to describe your verbs too? I really look forward to reading your next challenge, well done!
It sounds a lovely day in your 100 word challenge, Hal, and perfect for gardening! You’ve described your nouns really well in this – I particularly liked your phrase ‘crunched my delicious popping breakfast’. Maybe next time you could use some adverbs to describe your verbs too? I really look forward to reading your next challenge, well done!
Mrs Davis (Team 100WC)