Hi Ella – this is a good story – as we have always done that.. sneaking next door to get the ball back! well done. Just be a little careful to add all the punctuation you need. Caroline Team 100wc
Going through a door into another garden reminds of another story called,” The Secret Garden”. I’m pleased you didn’t get caught by the people next door.
Hi Ella,
what a good story!
It was lucky that you didn’t get caught by any of the people in next doors house!
Maybe next time you could add in some adjectives.
Well done,
from Rosie.
Hi Ella – this is a good story – as we have always done that.. sneaking next door to get the ball back! well done. Just be a little careful to add all the punctuation you need. Caroline Team 100wc
Going through a door into another garden reminds of another story called,” The Secret Garden”. I’m pleased you didn’t get caught by the people next door.
Hi Ella,
what a good story!
It was lucky that you didn’t get caught by any of the people in next doors house!
Maybe next time you could add in some adjectives.
Well done,
from Rosie.