I love how you ended up in a mystical island and described the different things you did using some great connectives to link your sentences together. However, it’s a shame it was a dream as it’s a very clichéd ending.
I think it’s great that you are using the 100WC to focus on various parts of your writing. I’m guessing the focus this week is connectives…? Have you ever drunk milk from a coconut?
Keep Writing
Mr Paul Huebl (Team 100WC)
Year 6 Teacher
Adelaide, Australia
mrhueblsclassroom.edublogs.org
I love how you ended up in a mystical island and described the different things you did using some great connectives to link your sentences together. However, it’s a shame it was a dream as it’s a very clichéd ending.
Emma (100wc team)
I think it’s great that you are using the 100WC to focus on various parts of your writing. I’m guessing the focus this week is connectives…? Have you ever drunk milk from a coconut?
Keep Writing
Mr Paul Huebl (Team 100WC)
Year 6 Teacher
Adelaide, Australia
mrhueblsclassroom.edublogs.org