The birds who swooped down

Posted on June 6, 2013 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to The birds who swooped down

  1. Fay (Team 100) says:
    June 10, 2013 at 10:40 am

    Hi Andrew,
    This is great – really funny and well-written too. I love this 100wc entry 🙂
    Just make sure to keep to the correct tense as you write and add commas when necessary. Well done.

  2. Betsye (100 WC Team) says:
    June 10, 2013 at 10:12 pm

    Hi Andrew,
    I just love the images of birds dive-bombing people, then birds getting their beaks stuck in the ground, and people taking them home for dinner. Very creative, and funny. Nicely developed.

  3. Alex B says:
    June 13, 2013 at 6:30 pm

    That’s really funny, Andrew. I especially like the ‘But the birds were watching me like a hawk as they were hawks’ part.

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