Hi Dilan,
I think you have done a very good job on this peice of work. Just remember next time to use the 100wc words (…the birds swooped down and…).
Keep up the good work,
from Rosie.
Your 100wc is very well organised and perfectly punctuated. You did exactly the right thing in helping the bird by taking it to Mum and Dad – parents always know best!
Maybe next time you could see if you could start your sentences in different ways.
Hi Dilan,
I think you have done a very good job on this peice of work. Just remember next time to use the 100wc words (…the birds swooped down and…).
Keep up the good work,
from Rosie.
Hi Dilan,
Your 100wc is very well organised and perfectly punctuated. You did exactly the right thing in helping the bird by taking it to Mum and Dad – parents always know best!
Maybe next time you could see if you could start your sentences in different ways.
Well done
Mr Connor
Team 100wc