Well done Jamie. You put some exelent descriptions in your work like “colossal”.However, I would like to know more about what seed ice cream tastes like.
How clever to think up a seed flavor ice cream, because of course the birds would want to eat it! That is some fun writing to read, along with the part where you jump into the nest – reminded me of Alice In Wonderland. You did a nice job of using the prompt – keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.
I really enjoyed reading this Jamie and it’s a great story. You obviously have a fantastic imagination which comes through in your writing. I love the way you don’t tell us what kind of birds they were until the end when it was a great surprise to find all those gold and silver things in their nest. Well done on a great 100 word challenge.
Ms O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
Well done Jamie. You put some exelent descriptions in your work like “colossal”.However, I would like to know more about what seed ice cream tastes like.
it will taste like seeds because it is called seed flavor ice cream but I could do a bit more description about it.
How clever to think up a seed flavor ice cream, because of course the birds would want to eat it! That is some fun writing to read, along with the part where you jump into the nest – reminded me of Alice In Wonderland. You did a nice job of using the prompt – keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.
I really enjoyed reading this Jamie and it’s a great story. You obviously have a fantastic imagination which comes through in your writing. I love the way you don’t tell us what kind of birds they were until the end when it was a great surprise to find all those gold and silver things in their nest. Well done on a great 100 word challenge.
Ms O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)