This is a jolly story Hermione!You have lots of characters in it. I think it would be even better if you could read it out loud to yourself and make a couple of tweaks where it doesn’t quite make sense. Thank you for joining 100wc this time!
Well done with this 100WC Hermione, I loved your character and the way she “bottom shuffled”- very imaginative! The fact that the eagle found the stone throwing “very relaxing” may not be very realistic (but that doesn’t really matter- it is a fairy story after all!), but it definitely made me laugh. Good work.
Fiona
A very imaginative story, and I love your way of thinking.
Maybe next time you look at this blog again and change your mistakes.
This is a jolly story Hermione!You have lots of characters in it. I think it would be even better if you could read it out loud to yourself and make a couple of tweaks where it doesn’t quite make sense. Thank you for joining 100wc this time!
Well done with this 100WC Hermione, I loved your character and the way she “bottom shuffled”- very imaginative! The fact that the eagle found the stone throwing “very relaxing” may not be very realistic (but that doesn’t really matter- it is a fairy story after all!), but it definitely made me laugh. Good work.
Fiona