the light was so bright

Posted on June 17, 2013 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to the light was so bright

  1. Chris says:
    June 18, 2013 at 11:31 am

    Well done, Milla.
    This is a nice, descriptive piece in clear sentences.
    You just need to check the opening sentences for punctuation.

  2. Maddie m says:
    June 21, 2013 at 6:13 am

    Hi Milla
    Great work! I really enjoyed reading your blog. I think the first sentence needs a bit of punctuation though.
    From Maddie M

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