Hi Daniel,
What a lovely story. I liked how you used other animals fleeing to warn you, it made it seem very real because I imagine that is what would happen in reality.
The idea of this little, unusual light as being the enemy and something scary is a nice idea, because it usually seems like a good thing.
Keep writing!
Rachel Wills Team 100wc
Hi Daniel
well done! you put lots of description into this telling the reader where you were and what you were doing.
Hi Daniel,
What a lovely story. I liked how you used other animals fleeing to warn you, it made it seem very real because I imagine that is what would happen in reality.
The idea of this little, unusual light as being the enemy and something scary is a nice idea, because it usually seems like a good thing.
Keep writing!
Rachel Wills Team 100wc