Wow Louis this is amazing! I love the words you have used such as immune and alerted. I could imagine someone doing that to just from your writing because it is really detailed and only in 100 words! Keep it up from Ross at http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
I thought that this story was very good. i sure have been in a situation like this before. I bet and hope all of your stories are like this.
Wow Louis this is amazing! I love the words you have used such as immune and alerted. I could imagine someone doing that to just from your writing because it is really detailed and only in 100 words! Keep it up from Ross at http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
I like the way you describe your surprise when you realised the date. Lucky you live so close to school!
Were you trying to get a day off school? good description of the angry head teacher. I could almost hear her voice.