Hello Rafi. I thought this was an excellent piece of writiing My favourite phrase was ‘A splitting headache was richocheting throughout my mind’. I felt really sorry for your character, making it to the airport when they felt so ill, and then realising that they were a day too early. I can see that you thought really carefully about your vocabulary.
Next time try to stick to only 100 words. This will make you an even better writer, because you have to choose which words to leave out without losing any of your story.
Excellent Rafi! What fun and so appropriate for the prompt. That is the sort of thing I’m sure lots of people do every 4 years!! Thank you so much for joining the 100WC!
I liked it I also enjoyed it however some of the words were difficult
Hello Rafi. I thought this was an excellent piece of writiing My favourite phrase was ‘A splitting headache was richocheting throughout my mind’. I felt really sorry for your character, making it to the airport when they felt so ill, and then realising that they were a day too early. I can see that you thought really carefully about your vocabulary.
Next time try to stick to only 100 words. This will make you an even better writer, because you have to choose which words to leave out without losing any of your story.
Ha I liked it, it was a good 100 words of a story! Very nice work.
Excellent Rafi! What fun and so appropriate for the prompt. That is the sort of thing I’m sure lots of people do every 4 years!! Thank you so much for joining the 100WC!