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Hi Isabella,
Brilliant description, I really like the sentance when you said ‘The door knocker was a rusty lion, with only a slight tint of gold to suggest that it was once marvelous and shining.’
Well done,
from Rosie.
nice story and good punchuation, but remerber to check your spelling.
Hi I am lewis
http://year6bellevue2012.primaryblogger.co.uk/barry-gary/