Hi Thomas Well done I think it was a great idea to have a dare to go into a haunted house!
This is a very imaginative piece of writing Thomas and I really like how you managed to use some good descriptive words too. Well done for using commas, don’t forget that very long sentences are quite difficult for the reader to read though!
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Hi Thomas
Well done I think it was a great idea to have a dare to go into a haunted house!
This is a very imaginative piece of writing Thomas and I really like how you managed to use some good descriptive words too. Well done for using commas, don’t forget that very long sentences are quite difficult for the reader to read though!