This piece of writing is good but don’t use so many explanation marks because it can ruin your work. Also, you have missed a question mark. I really like how you used some speech. Just read over to make sure its correct because it doesn’t make much sense. Good try. I hope to see you next time on the 100wc.
From Joseph
This piece of writing is good but don’t use so many explanation marks because it can ruin your work. Also, you have missed a question mark. I really like how you used some speech. Just read over to make sure its correct because it doesn’t make much sense. Good try. I hope to see you next time on the 100wc.
From Joseph