Hi Maddie, you have a really original idea for your 100WC this week, well done.
You have used a range of punctuation in your writing; , . ” ” ! / and it is very well laid out with a new line for each speaker.
Rather than using ‘said’ throughout your writing, you have chosen much more interesting alternatives which make your writing more interesting.
Well done and keep writing. 🙂
Great list of occupations Maddie. Would have liked to know what you will choose.
Hi Maddie, you have a really original idea for your 100WC this week, well done.
You have used a range of punctuation in your writing; , . ” ” ! / and it is very well laid out with a new line for each speaker.
Rather than using ‘said’ throughout your writing, you have chosen much more interesting alternatives which make your writing more interesting.
Well done and keep writing. 🙂